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Reviews For: Two Hearts

exit laughing. 2007-05-25 ch 1,	abuseExcellent, as usual! Sorry it's been awhile since my last review (I can see YOU'VE been busy writing!), but reality really is a pain in the butt. Still, GREAT WORK! ;) Keep it up! ~Katrina
Ripped wings of a Butterfly 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseVery Beautiful to hear.. very nice poetic piece you got here.. so sweet! :)
painted.music 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abusekonban wa Hi again! I'm late at reading this, go figure. LoL. Anyway, looks like I'll have to write a very detailed review to make up for it. ... Yeah, that's not likely to happen. It's nothing against the poem (which I'm adding to my 'favs' BTW -- amazing!!). I'm just so exhausted now; you have no idea. groan But I'm not reviewing to tell you the story of my life. ;P I'm reviewing to tell you what a really wonderful poem I thought this was. Truly outstanding, really. The line: "When her soul is in his hands" is so descriptive, so gentle if you think about it. My favorite line(s): "As he is watching and waiting/When his heart is debating." I just like the awesome flow of those two lines. It was cool with a really funky rhyme. Funky in a good way, of course. the rhymes in general were all really nice (for want of a better word), though, with a great flow. "When his crystal eyes/Are of the cloudy skies." Others, too, but that one just stuck out at me the most (besides for the one I previously mentioned). I especially liked that last line there -- "He whispers, 'I love you.'" How sweet. I want to meet a guy like that! Gute nacht, tomodachi -Shan- P.S: Hope this review was as satisfying as your poem was to read! A great way to end off the night, let me assure you. =D
Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abusewow, that was really good, i could feel the emotion in the words of the poe, i also loved the rythm ^^, good job ~evanescence123~
Ashelin 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is so sweet and feels so smooth when I read it. I like it a lot! Great job!

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