| Reviews for The Tide Is On Its Way Back |
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dooley creel 6/19/07 . chapter 1Thanx for the review on water molecules. Your poem about the tide as a metaphore is beautiful, if somewhat sad in places. Tide rips and wave crests Calligraphy on the sea Whispered word unknown Stiff legged gulls carefully step As if not to wet their feet |
twilight.wind 5/21/07 . chapter 1i like it :D |