aww. But that's so cute. SHE GET'S HER HAPPILY EVER AFTER!! Right? of course. But that's so sweet that he wants to marry her.( the nice brother i mean).

so he objected? idk. that parts not very clear to me. but anyway i was like what she's getting married to prince charming? no. i was practically screaming i object at the computer! lol. but very well written please keep writing.

wow, thats really good!! very moving with it in poetry-like form
loved it!!

That's who I am, but I'm too lazy to click the button to sign in. Instead I waste more energy typing this out, but if I stopped and the deleted it all and then signed in now, it would take an even bigger and no-one would know.

I'm going to stop now and comment on your story.

It was good and more of a 'story' type story than a story type story.

I'm eloquent. Really.

Anyway, the review... I liked it, the comparison of fire and ice, the way that is reflected in not only their personality and the way she feels, but also in their own looks, although you didn't describe Boy 2, I got the impression he had brown hair and some smouldering eye colour. I like the way he objects right at the end. Actually, I like happy endings and this to have one, I like this one.

Before I say anything else, keep writing, I'll detach myself from the computer before I damage anyone.