Good story, I like the plot and all, I havn't read the whole thing yet, but I'm working on it. I'll give you another review once I'm done, lol. Just this one part
"“Let me see it,” he said softly. He looked at my hand. The splintered wood of the pencil scraped part of my hand and it was beginning to bleed. He reached into his bag and pulled out a roll of bandages. He gently pulled out all of the splinters and wrapped the bandage around my hand. When he finished, he looked up at me. I wore a confused look."
Who carries bandages in their bookbag. ^^ Just wondering... found that part a little unrealistic other then that I really like it. :)