Oh my goodness...I didn't know that you had a fictionpress! This makes me happy. Very happy.

Now to actually REVIEW...
That was a great poem. I especially love these two lines:
"And black at dest night"
"Of color, glory, light"
You write great poems, so keep it up. The world would be a boring place w/o your poems

-Katy
(AKA Florence Pinky-Poo)

M: this is pretty, but I have to admit I've seen you do (in my opinion) better work. I'm not entirely sure what you're communicating. It is pretty, but not very deep, I guess. I hope that made sense and didn't come across as harsh.

It's beautiful! I can't think of any contructive critisism. It's lovely.

That's really lovely. Nicely done, more 'traditional', and a pleasure to read.