 Lady Vecona 2008-07-27 . chapter 1Beautifully written
Look from her face and from her eyes
Lest you should fall to your demise. |
 im.a.werewolf.rawr. 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Woah. That actually gave me shivers. Very nice poem! |
 SnappedxHeartstrings 2008-05-26 . chapter 1arg! I'm very jealous of this poem. This is what I want to write like, but just don't seem to be able to.I envy your writing skills!
btw-thanks for reviewing my poem |
 lookin4nemo 2008-04-12 . chapter 1wow love the description! it is great! keep writing like this an you'll become an author! great work
~impressed lookin4nemo~ |
 Thenardier 2008-04-01 . chapter 1For some reason, I am thinking of The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. This poem is as fascinating and captivating as that piece. |
 East-0f-Eden 2008-03-16 . chapter 1It's very foreboding and epiclike. It reminds me of the poems in LOTR. Keep writting. |
 Laura Schiller 2008-03-03 . chapter 1*shiver* This is really good...reminds me of J. R. R. Tolkien's ballads. But who is "she"? |
 NadNad 2008-01-13 . chapter 1it's like you're really telling an old folk story. you got me fooled there. haha. in other words, well written. |
 Billie.Joelle 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Very nice! I really liked the rhyme and the story line, its all very well written. Good job! |
 half-sketched.staccatos 2008-01-06 . chapter 1konnichi wa
Wow, I really loved this! I haven't read a rhyming poem in quite a while, mostly because on fictionpress the majority aren't my type of poem - cutesy or whatever. Just what I used to write. :P
But this was excellent! It's the type of poem that is perfect to rhyme, despite the fact that it's not cutesy. It's absolutely perfect! Wonderful. :D
*adds to favs*
Zaijen
-Shan- |
 Katsaya 2008-01-03 . chapter 1This is a stunning poem. The rhyming scheme is thought out well and fits so perfectly, I love it. |
 Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 . chapter 1this is so beautiful
and it wraps up perfectly
"Return from paths that perils trail
Lest all goes down to no avail."
wow |
 Society's Willing Pariah 2007-06-30 . chapter 1The rhyme scheme is very well thought out. I especially like the last two lines "Return from paths that perils trail/Lest all goes down to no avail." We all must beware the temptresses in our lives, don't we now? |
 unshattered 2007-05-19 . chapter 1Great structure, you're very talented. |