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Reviews For: Her Dark Lair

Tourniquet Eclipse
2008-07-27
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written
Look from her face and from her eyes
Lest you should fall to your demise.
im.a.werewolf.rawr.
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseWoah. That actually gave me shivers. Very nice poem!
SnappedxHeartstrings
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abusearg! I'm very jealous of this poem. This is what I want to write like, but just don't seem to be able to.I envy your writing skills!

btw-thanks for reviewing my poem
lookin4nemo
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abusewow love the description! it is great! keep writing like this an you'll become an author! great work
~impressed lookin4nemo~
Thenardier
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseFor some reason, I am thinking of The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. This poem is as fascinating and captivating as that piece.
East-0f-Eden
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseIt's very foreboding and epiclike. It reminds me of the poems in LOTR. Keep writting.
Laura Schiller
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuse*shiver* This is really good...reminds me of J. R. R. Tolkien's ballads. But who is "she"?
NadNad
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseit's like you're really telling an old folk story. you got me fooled there. haha. in other words, well written.
Billie.Joelle
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseVery nice! I really liked the rhyme and the story line, its all very well written. Good job!
painted.music
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

Wow, I really loved this! I haven't read a rhyming poem in quite a while, mostly because on fictionpress the majority aren't my type of poem - cutesy or whatever. Just what I used to write. :P

But this was excellent! It's the type of poem that is perfect to rhyme, despite the fact that it's not cutesy. It's absolutely perfect! Wonderful. :D

*adds to favs*

Zaijen
-Shan-
Katsaya
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is a stunning poem. The rhyming scheme is thought out well and fits so perfectly, I love it.
Lady Fingers
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abusethis is so beautiful
and it wraps up perfectly

"Return from paths that perils trail
Lest all goes down to no avail."

wow
Society's Willing Pariah
2007-06-30
ch 1,
abuseThe rhyme scheme is very well thought out. I especially like the last two lines "Return from paths that perils trail/Lest all goes down to no avail." We all must beware the temptresses in our lives, don't we now?
unshattered
2007-05-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat structure, you're very talented.
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