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| Tourniquet Eclipse 2008-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully written Look from her face and from her eyes Lest you should fall to your demise. |
| im.a.werewolf.rawr. 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWoah. That actually gave me shivers. Very nice poem! |
| SnappedxHeartstrings 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abusearg! I'm very jealous of this poem. This is what I want to write like, but just don't seem to be able to.I envy your writing skills! btw-thanks for reviewing my poem |
| lookin4nemo 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusewow love the description! it is great! keep writing like this an you'll become an author! great work ~impressed lookin4nemo~ |
| Thenardier 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason, I am thinking of The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. This poem is as fascinating and captivating as that piece. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's very foreboding and epiclike. It reminds me of the poems in LOTR. Keep writting. |
| Laura Schiller 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuse*shiver* This is really good...reminds me of J. R. R. Tolkien's ballads. But who is "she"? |
| NadNad 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseit's like you're really telling an old folk story. you got me fooled there. haha. in other words, well written. |
| Billie.Joelle 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I really liked the rhyme and the story line, its all very well written. Good job! |
| painted.music 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa Wow, I really loved this! I haven't read a rhyming poem in quite a while, mostly because on fictionpress the majority aren't my type of poem - cutesy or whatever. Just what I used to write. :P But this was excellent! It's the type of poem that is perfect to rhyme, despite the fact that it's not cutesy. It's absolutely perfect! Wonderful. :D *adds to favs* Zaijen -Shan- |
| Katsaya 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a stunning poem. The rhyming scheme is thought out well and fits so perfectly, I love it. |
| Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abusethis is so beautiful and it wraps up perfectly "Return from paths that perils trail Lest all goes down to no avail." wow |
| Society's Willing Pariah 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyme scheme is very well thought out. I especially like the last two lines "Return from paths that perils trail/Lest all goes down to no avail." We all must beware the temptresses in our lives, don't we now? |
| unshattered 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat structure, you're very talented. |