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Reviews For: Fatal Misconceptions
ella3114 2009-06-18 . chapter 1
I... don't know what to say anymore.It's just that your story was really am the greatest,most interesting story I've had ever read.Last but not least,keep up the good work! ;)
WithoutException 2009-03-26 . chapter 1
This is an amazing piece of writing. It was confusing, at first, because I wasn't sure who was talking/doing what, but once I figured it out, I liked the layout. I agree with an earlier reviewer that the actual article should be longer (I don't know about funnier, because this isn't a particularly funny story). And Grant's bit at the beginning kind of makes me not take him seriously (the whole future-Grant thing).

I actually read this story yesterday, without reviewing, and it stuck in my head, so I felt the need to come back and say something. Your portrayal of "Sammy Stalker" was awesome. Definitely allowed me to see him as someone to be pitied, and a clear case for the insanity defense. And Daye's pseudo-mental breakdown at the end is absolutely tragic. The closing line of her section "I have a boyfriend. His name is Kyle," really shows that she has lost all sense of herself.

And to close: Yay! Good job.
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-06 . chapter 1
This made me so sad...but I loved the way it progressed and the ending. While the plot was a little far fetched, it was written very believably. I also liked the style in which you wrote it in. I especially enjoyed Daye's part...the way she described herself made me want to cry. Great job.
Lily Llynn 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
It's not cliche, and I like it. (: All the POVs are very different and you portrayed them well, but it got a bit confusing (i.e.: The Gossip. XD). Other than that, it was good. (:
luv me like no other 2007-05-19 . chapter 1
This is really good, although i think that the actual news article could've been longer and funnier, but it was still great. i liek how u cud do so many different points of views and characters.
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