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| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2008-01-01 ch 6,  | abuseI really wanted him to say 'Love you too, bud' then give him a dog treat. Really really wanted that. I don't even know why. |
| firestar267 2007-12-30 ch 5, | abuseI enjoyed reading this :) please update soon :) |
| merrymowmow 2007-09-23 ch 4, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Kizuna 2007-07-15 ch 4, | abuseCharlie kissed Kevin again! So cute!;) And Kevin and Adolf skipped school! I can't help but feel that Ad kinda cheated on Jeff though, they should so get together!;) I hope you update soon. This is a good story!;) |
| Kizuna 2007-07-15 ch 3, | abuseAd and Jeff is cute! I hope they'll get together!;) And Charlie kissed Kevin! So sweet!;) And now I'm so off to read the last updated chapter! I wonder what's gonna happen...;) |
| Kizuna 2007-07-15 ch 2, | abuseAww, Charlie talked to him!;) Kevin is so sweet! And I really hope Ad is right, that Charlie DO want to boink Kevin!;) And then off to the next chapter...;) |
| Kizuna 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseOkey, so I have some spare time right now and decided to start reading this story... Seeing as it's WIP and not all that long yet...;) I hope it gets longer soon though!;P Seriously, though, because so far I really like it!;) Once upon a time, inthe middle of puberty, (not all that long ago, mind), I was just like Kevin!;) Okay, I'm stopping this rambling now and going over to chapter two... I hope he talks to Charlie!;) |
| angel953 2007-06-23 ch 4, | abusehahahahahahaha that was funny lol ad is so bad lol wondering if charlie and jeff would be ok with what ad did at the end... |
| angel953 2007-06-23 ch 3, | abusei like this chapter very much cute ending too |
| hello there lovely 2007-06-18 ch 4, | abuseDid Adolf do something with that Dillon guy or not? hahahah i'm confused about that part. >_> |
| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuseMy all-time-fave-character is a whore! Okay. I can deal with that. Sonic! Oh my god! I love Sonic! But I live in Michigan and we don't have Sonic... because... we just don't. And the closest Sonic is like four hours away but it would be so amazing if I could just get me some Sonic. I always get it whenever I go to Texas. Anyhow. I forgot to put this in my last review because... I forgot. Anyhow. I totally know what GSA was when you first put it in here because I totally read Rainbow Boys. Oh yeah. |
| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abuseYou used the word.. Nifty... in this chapter twice. I would've understand once.. but twice!? I nearly died. I hate that word with a passion. Well... I hate it but it also bring fear into my heart and my lungs close up and I either wanna cover my ears or close my eyes. I don't even know why. But I forgive you because you're so amazing. |
| The Astronaut 2007-06-16 ch 3, | abuseI love it! It's so sincere and cute. I love the whole brat pack of friends. Usually that annoys me, seeing as I don't have many friends myself(heh, writer and part-time loser), but this group seems cute and fun. I wish I had a pack of homo friends, god! Anyways, great job, keep writing this! xoxo, The Astronaut |
| magalina 2007-06-16 ch 3, | abuseC: Cute. |
| hello there lovely 2007-05-29 ch 2, | abusehehe i can't wait until you update :) |