You forgot:
We all live.
But most of us are long since dead.

Very nice.

I really like this poem, it's very touching and nice and it's true for the most part... oh and if you're wondering I'm the same person from Fanfic, yes no one got my pen name from fanfic.

Awesome huh?

Panda-chan

hello here i am in your fiction press stories and i really like it.. keep up the good work.

Such a nice poem. I am glad you finally updated. Keep it up

Do not think of the following as a criticism, just a reply to the thoughts evoked by the poem.

To be devoid of all emotion is not a life at all.
Emotions are one of the many things that make us human,
They enrich life.
Savour the moment of each breath,
of every moment that you are truly happy.
Smile again;
A true tresure.
Given by many, but not often enough
Feel its warmth,
It’s a child’s first gift.

This is a lovely poem. It brought a tear to my eye, i have felt exactly the same at one point in my life. i ttakes a lot to be able to publish a poem with such raw emotions, well done.

Aww lovely poem as always, please update soner.

I care, and ill always be there. Though i no i live like ages away heheh. Anyway i love this poem just like the last. And i undertsand it 100%. Keep up the good work and update sooner.

Hey omg this poem is awsome. I can so relate, and yeah. I still kind of dont understand it, but i already sent you a message through quizilla asking my question so just reply through that, its easier. Though i think i understand it a bit now that i read you latest journal update. Anyway add more soon and tell me when you do, though i guess you always do. Talk to you soon my friend

omg thats awesome as really creative good job girls :D

Great story.

Keep up the great writing!

Hey yay two in one day. I really love this poem and think it's your best yet. No offense with the others i loved them to. Anyway update soon.

It may not be as good as your others but intresting still. I think its not bad

This one is my favourite, though the second is really good to. Just forgot to add that in. Thanks for replying to my review

Aww a beutifull collection of peoms. Really they are, please add more soon.