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| ludmilla inc 2008-01-14 ch 2,  | abuseThis was very cute and well written. I'm not a fan of the spacing, but you did nice. The characters seem likeable, but I can't help feeling that one or two of them are falling into stereotypes - like Jonah for example. Nice start. |
| ludmilla inc 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI like reading summaries as much as reading the actual stories. Yours are fun and easy. I hope the stories come soon. =] |
| nat van os 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusethey all sound very interesting! i really want to read two and four the most! |
| leslienicolespeaks 2008-01-05 ch 2, | abuseUh, I have the impression I've read this chapter before. lol. but i liked it. still not my very cup of tea (god i just love this expression) but sweet and nice for a change of my reading moods. i can't wait for the next segments though they sound juicier! |
| CHIIJOY 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abusei liked it. especially how you explained everyone and their relationship to each other. (cool names too). good job. :) |
| Penny 2007-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello there! I'm too lazy to log in at the moment, but I just wanted to say that the whole thing was really cute. I seriously did not see the whole "two cakes" thing coming! Very easy to read and entertaining! |
| elevatorpassenger 2007-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseme likes it a lot. you developed the characters nicely. |
| ihrtbks 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThey do say love is irrational but forgives all. Beautifully written story with impeccable formatting...I didn't get lost in the paragraphs! GREAT JOB! |