 Mystery Sandwich 2007-06-29 . chapter 1Ah, this makes me wish the world could work the way they always tell you it does when you're young enough not to know the difference.
When did we lose our way? And why won't we ever band together and get something done?
Easier to just let someone else worry about it, I guess.
But thank you for writing this--for just one moment, I felt like the situation might not be completely hopeless. Sentiments like this could be the salvation of this generation. |
 The Jynx of Kari 2007-05-20 . chapter 1Wow, one of the best works I've read. Amazing stuff right there. Awesome, awesome, awesome. Just plain--you know, this isn't a review without a little bit of critisism, in the end, within the last four lines, one isn't spaced right. Go to live preview and see what I'm talking about.
__Kari
P.S: By the way, I could totally hear this as a chant. . . |