omyjeezus! This is amazing! I love your wording and the powerful anger. It's so inspiring. I can't even fully describe how much I love this. It is definitely my new favorite poem.

Being used isn't a good feeling, but what I went through was different. Still, I must say I liked it! You had a special tone in it due to the words you'd chosen! This was nice! And the way you'd repeated some of the lines was a nice effect!
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