This was good! A wonderful rhyme scheme and a good point. ^_^

Whoa, those are words with alot of meaning in them. You're good at choosing words that clearly state that you have a lot you want to say. I particularly liked this sentence "I hate how much you say it's me that you adore, But most of all I hate the holes You've punched in my armor". It was so easy to understand. This was a nice poem!
The Reverse Edge Blade