|Reviews for Joy|
| hikaruslight 5/23/07 . chapter 1
Two lines that i didn't really like:
I just fell on the floor,
-kinda ruins the feeling of floating
Thank you for bringing it into my life.
-not sure why, but it doesn't seem to fit in this poem
But, anyways! I really like this one. It has a really light feel to it. It made me think of white feathers. ... Not sure why...