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| Vester 2007-08-31 ch 1,  | abusePerfection. That's all I can say about this. I liked the sex scene (who wouldn't) but I didn't just stop after I read it, I kept reading and I loved it! |
| jus-me 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseTo be honest? You even got a few tears out of me. lol. And I'm not a crier. lol. Was definately a good story. I loved the way you flashed back to build up to the end. Very well written |
| x-ecstasy 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abusethis was great:] i agree that it was pretty sad at the end, but you still did a great job writing this. xx |