this poem i really good! I like how you use different kinds of words not just simple ones. GREAT POEM AS ALWAYS!

Ahaha! This made me smile and laugh a bit. I know exactly what you're getting at. It sends a strong picture. ]

Alright! What i don't like:

Oh, wait, you already know...

Never mind! Next one!

"Your life sucks" is an exact quote from her. People that know her understand what I mean...Yeah, my work has been going down hill, and it's emotional. (These times are reallyy hard right now for me.) Thanks for your comments. Love ya!

Nice poem, The "your life sucks" sticks out but oh well