  *ghost of chrismas* 2008-11-16 . chapter 1 I love the lines in italics. |
  Saki*in*your*dreams 2008-03-27 . chapter 1Absolutely amazing. You really have a way with words in this piece. Keep it up. This is really great! |
 Lustfully Enraged 2007-07-24 . chapter 1She’s hooked on her own broken shards, constantly trying to put them together, when they’re letter left untouched. -- should be BETTER left untouched. |
| squeeeee 2007-07-21 . chapter 1 Angsty... Who is this about if you don't mind me asking.. |
| Addy S. 2007-07-14 . chapter 1 Are you okay now? |
| e. 2007-06-15 . chapter 1 Your story conveys such intense feelings. Brilliant work! =) |
 jane speaks 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Amazing. It is really sad how I can identify with this girl.
"She is a pathological liar, the best of indecision and more addictive than methamphetamine." I love this line. |
| Cassie 2007-05-22 . chapter 1 Deep! |
| Nikita Johnson 2007-05-21 . chapter 1 Wonderful image painted. |
 she's so hardcore 2007-05-21 . chapter 1I used to be like this. I'm so glad I'm not anymore.
Beautifully expressed.
~j. lynn |
| Lori 2007-05-21 . chapter 1 wow. i love how it's so tragically poetic. best of luck! |
 bex17 2007-05-21 . chapter 1the depressing thing about this is that this girl IS me. oh well. such is life.
bec |
 D Ryu 2007-05-21 . chapter 1OMG THANK YOU!! xD [glomps to death]
"The real her never existed .She didn’t.." |
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