 candykillz 2009-10-23 . chapter 1Wow. 3 years? That's a really long time. I love this, it's realistic and sweet!:) |
 tin 2009-09-30 . chapter 1 HeLOO
im tin c. fr. the phil.
n i would like to suggest a story..
preferably characters named christine and michael as main character's names..
-i do love your stories,i can relate myself to it.
-they're awesome i must say..
:)) |
 hegberg 2008-11-17 . chapter 1You can't say this is a One Shot, there is much more that can be said this is a great 1st chapter :). |
 OrangeStar13 2008-09-22 . chapter 1wow. i liked that. :) i always do love one shots with such a sweet poignant message.. |
 Lily Llynn 2008-06-19 . chapter 1I'm a bit confused. Is Grade Ten a senior? And Grade Nine a junior? Because in our society (American... West Coast, I guess?), Grade Ten is sophomore and Grade Nine is freshman.
Fluffy, yes, and I think the coincidence that they both think it's like a square moon is a bit of a stretch (unless he heard her?), but it's well-written and makes me feel a little fuzzy inside. (: I'm glad xoxluurve added it to our c2. (: |
 Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-16 . chapter 1Ah! Cute! The entire time, they were chasing each other only to find themselves finally talking at the Art Exhibit! Very nice! Good job!
=D
Kay (Let Them Eat Cake) |
 White Rose Blossom 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Adorable :)
Great job!
-Aria |
 fortuneismymuse 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Wow... I can completely relate to this. :) Going on my favorites list. |
 Angel of Ink 2008-04-22 . chapter 1It's so sweet. I think her agonizing over never being able to have him, when all she would have had to do was say hi (if he was looking at her like she thought he was) was a bit cheesy, but it's really quite good. |
 SapphireEyes16 2007-07-28 . chapter 1i luv this one-shot, itz in my favez! |
 Jerilee 2007-05-23 . chapter 1I love your stories!! They just pull at my heart strings. Beautifully written. I love the longing and how the couple just felt right. I'm glad they finally got to talk. |
 White Rabbit Tale 2007-05-22 . chapter 1Not as quirky and cute as your other stories, but definitely a good story to tide me over until the next chapter of Prince Charming comes out. And actually, at the end with them simply introducing themselves was pretty adorable. And I loved the theme of this, because I can relate to it so well. Not just in terms of talking to cute boys, but in everything. I always tell myself just to go for it, but I hardly ever take that advice. There's always something that you can use to talk yourself out of it, you know?
Anyway, well-written and I enjoyed it very much. :)
Now go update The Prince Charming Search!! >:o |
 xonea 2007-05-22 . chapter 1that was really, really sweet and amazing.
i love it.
xD |
 euphorictragedy 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Wow, this was really cool. I can relate to it as well. I had this crush on a guy that was a grade above me and every since I saw him look at me my freshman year, I had a crush on him. He would always look at me and I him. I think I only spoke to him twice and I will always remember those times. I was drawn to him in a way that I've never felt before. I was always tempted to just go up and talk to him but I never did. He graduated last year without ever knowing of my affections. I see him every so often and I still wonder what would've happened if I had confessed. I guess I'll never know. |
 Miz Em 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Ohh, I loved this! It was just a very sweet thing to read. ^_^ Nicely done. |