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Lily Llynn 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abuseI'm a bit confused. Is Grade Ten a senior? And Grade Nine a junior? Because in our society (American... West Coast, I guess?), Grade Ten is sophomore and Grade Nine is freshman. Fluffy, yes, and I think the coincidence that they both think it's like a square moon is a bit of a stretch (unless he heard her?), but it's well-written and makes me feel a little fuzzy inside. (: I'm glad xoxluurve added it to our c2. (:
Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-16 ch 1,	abuseAh! Cute! The entire time, they were chasing each other only to find themselves finally talking at the Art Exhibit! Very nice! Good job! =D Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
White Rose Blossom 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseAdorable :) Great job! -Aria
fortuneismymuse 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseWow... I can completely relate to this. :) Going on my favorites list.
Angel of Ink 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's so sweet. I think her agonizing over never being able to have him, when all she would have had to do was say hi (if he was looking at her like she thought he was) was a bit cheesy, but it's really quite good.
SapphireEyes16 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abusei luv this one-shot, itz in my favez!
Jerilee 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abuseI love your stories!! They just pull at my heart strings. Beautifully written. I love the longing and how the couple just felt right. I'm glad they finally got to talk.
White Rabbit Tale 2007-05-22 ch 1,	abuseNot as quirky and cute as your other stories, but definitely a good story to tide me over until the next chapter of Prince Charming comes out. And actually, at the end with them simply introducing themselves was pretty adorable. And I loved the theme of this, because I can relate to it so well. Not just in terms of talking to cute boys, but in everything. I always tell myself just to go for it, but I hardly ever take that advice. There's always something that you can use to talk yourself out of it, you know? Anyway, well-written and I enjoyed it very much. :) Now go update The Prince Charming Search!! >:o
xonea 2007-05-22 ch 1,	abusethat was really, really sweet and amazing. i love it. xD
euphorictragedy 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was really cool. I can relate to it as well. I had this crush on a guy that was a grade above me and every since I saw him look at me my freshman year, I had a crush on him. He would always look at me and I him. I think I only spoke to him twice and I will always remember those times. I was drawn to him in a way that I've never felt before. I was always tempted to just go up and talk to him but I never did. He graduated last year without ever knowing of my affections. I see him every so often and I still wonder what would've happened if I had confessed. I guess I'll never know.
Miz Em 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseOhh, I loved this! It was just a very sweet thing to read. ^_^ Nicely done.
Ruh 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseomg...this oneshot is absolutley amazing...even i like this guy who is a year odler than me and he is graduating next yr...i wish something like this could be reality but he doesnt even know i exist...lol...but anywaz, ver well written story
teenqueen21 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseGreat story , its really different from the kind of thing you find here . And i can difinitly relate with having a crush on a senior , i kinda fell for one too ,although i never had the courage to go talk to him . i really enjoyed your story , hope you post another one soon.
earlyadmissionsprisoner 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was AMAZING! I really liked the story, simple and sweet!
a bitter kiss. 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseFirst of all, wow! You're in the Philippines?! Hey, I'm in the Philippines right now for one of my dad's business trips! I was just at Greenbelt earlier today and ate at Sentro. It's pretty hot out, huh? Hahaha, ok, I'm a travel geek. Sorry for the ramble. =P I love the aspect of this story. I could sort of relate because the guy I like just graduated and well, I never talked to him. I was sort of sad when his graduation got nearer and nearer because I'd never be able to see him again. So, on his last day of school, I went up to him, introduced myself and well... we went out, and we're just good friends now. But I'm happy that I got to talk to him, you know? I wouldn't have that... 'What if?' feeling in me if I just saw him leave. I guess that's why your last line, '... stop relying on fate and do something' hit me. Great story. :)

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