i love the imagery in this one. its beautiful and captivating

such lovely imagery and such a lovely concept

I like this.. the idea of clouds blockign stars is great... and the whole play on the concept of reaching for the stars is awesome.. its beautifully written and very bittersweet... I also like hte ending a lot.. slightly hopeful

My favorite poem by you. It really painted the picture for to see. I really love it.

You created such pretty images - 'skyline reflections of what you were always like' (I instantly thought of the perfectly arched back) and 'walking on tiptoes and balancing yourself on that single brittle starlight-starbeam.' It reminds me of the listlessness I used to dwell in when I was younger - when dreams were so close yet far. Great work

This was really sad, and amazingly beautiful. The metaphors you used, and just the images you created were wonderful. This was beautiful. Great job.