Interesting turn of events. I know it took me a long time to read, but don't wait so long to update next time. :)

Don't wait so long to update next time :P

wow, surpising events but understandble in this cause, of course like in real life, way 2 go!

Wow,very vivid descrption, nice job!

Hmm..wow. And why haven't you written any stories before this?? And how come you didn't tell me you had posted this so I could you know READ IT?? uh huh..I see how it is. :]]

Anyway, I really loved this and if you don't continue it, I think I'll scream. Either that, or I'll do it myself :P

Very nice.

This is very very good. I only have a little bit of criticism: watch some of your wording. Other than that, I am eager for an update.

so...okay...I know you just posted today...but well...I'm dying for an update. *tries to wait patiently* ...alright I'd love to know what happens because your introduction totally hooked me. It's very moving. I'm not exactly sure why, but the way you wrote it really got me. A little more description of the school would've been nice, but the way you did it is very nice. Picturesque. For awhile, anyways. So...what happens?!?! Cheers and keep writing!! -NightWing23