Wow! Bravo to you. I have to say, your getting better with each chapter. This one had real talent in it. You began it slightly oddly, just jumping in that the flow was slightly strange, but you concluded it perfectly. I loved how you did the last paragraph. It felt...right.

Bravo!
Night Silver's Whisper

Thanks for the update! A fun read, even the second time around. The talent show was great, wasn't it? Or at least... fun. It seemed to me that it went wonderfully, but in retrospect I can't be sure. But it was hellishly fun. Great chapter, and all that! By the way, none of those compliments were undeserved.

~TRW

Hey! I like what I've read so far, though it makes me want to try my hand at this myself. I want to read the snow cabin episode, though! A lot happened there. It was pretty cool. And anyway, love ya lots and all that.

~Emyli (Maygan)

This is an interesting start to a story. I like the main character because she tells it as it is and gives good descriptions of the other characters. She tells the good, the bad, and the ugly. I really want to see where this story goes, so keep writing!

It's interesting to read your take on things, even if they are exagerated a bit. It's very interesting, as you told me about mine, to see you write from a point of view you know very well. The Snow Cabin? I look forward to that chapter.
Night Silver's Whisper