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| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 6, | abuseYou did a really good on the characters and their interactions in this chapter. Very realistic, very believable :) ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 5, | abuseThat was a wonderful chapter. I can't seem to stop reading this! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 4, | abuse"You're an angry duck..."-Nice line :) Fantastic chapter, as always! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 3, | abuseI'm still laughing at that last line! Hee hee! Great chapter. ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 2, | abuseExcellent so far. Quite suspenseful! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseYES! Volume 3! I've been waiting for this... ~carm~ |