I love this story!
It has all of y favorite things rolled into one...cliche, romance, drama, humor, and mystery!
You really know how to write and I can't wait til you post the sequel!
By the way I know you bashed your own work...but who doesn't??
I'm just happy you have enough guts to post your work!
Anyways...
Love the story
:D

~SingingSweetLullabies~

Wow! I really loved your story! Though the ending was really depressing in a way, haha i guess i'm more for the cliché happy endings =)
Anyways I look forward to reading a sequel!

i can't wait to read the sequel (:

I really hope one day you finish this story. :( Even if it is as a sequel.

Um... What?

okay.. i don't get this chapter.. Chuck?Chandler?Tommy? WTF?..

um...hey
it was a gd story but im confused about the ending...you say bee was drugged and raped but then the story ends.
1. rape is quite a serious thing and you have just passed it off as something that happens as often as people smile which to me doesnt make sense even thou lots of people do get raped all the time. to me making light of that situation is disgusting.
2. You say cassie ran away and was murdered and th whole school hates bee but does the rape have something to do with that? you didnt elaborate!
3. is there going to be a sequel to this story explaining/giving answers to the questions in bees head at th end of the story.

all up i think you just need to elaborate more and think carefully about how you treat issues such as rape because you might offend some people with how you treated that issue in this story. but i can see that it was just because of bees personality and attitude and how she deals with everything after getting blamed for cassies death.

yay megatokyo~
lol
very nice~

I know this is going to sound really stupid but Bridget sounds scarily like me. Right down to the hight, age, fears and dress sense! Also I'd just like to say that i don't like Micael (even though he has done nothing to actually make me not like him i just don't) and I think she should ditch him and go out with Mitch. You want to know another scary thing? Mix Mitch and Lucas together, (keep the british accent becasue i'm british myself) and you basically have my best friend. Sorry, i'm just rambling on and on now but this is a great story. Kirsten is a bitch. Well if you have actually bothered to read all of this review then thank you because a lot of people would have just stopped reading after the third line... Sorry I'm rambling again.
Thanks. Addie. x

awesome story.
Are you writing another one?

haha, great chapter, but you know minnesota is named land of 10,0 lakes. all it is, is practically lakes! lol

OMG. ABUSE D: How could leave such a cliffhanger (I mean, sure, I loved it and all, but this is like torture!!)
I'm totally anxious for the new one!
TOTALLY loved this story. It kept me laughing, crying, and everything. =] That's what a good story does. (ehem.thisshouldtotallybepublishedandmadeintoarealbookbecauseiwouldtotallybuyit.) ;D

hello! your story has a very promising plot. however, reading it is quite draggy because you narrate every single that happens. as such, it also has a very staccato-like rhythm which doesn't make the story flow too well. on the upside, i think that just deleting all the mundane details will make it a good story. all the best!

Hey are you going to wright a sequel to Steps of Life? I really liked that story.

I thought the whole story was amazing. I just finished reading it after staying up the whole night. I am so sad that Mitchel left! I like him way better than Micael and I hope they end up together. Please write the next story soon! You better bring back Mitchel too. ^^