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| -nya-sama 2007-12-30 ch 16,  | abuseyou really should have this published. its better than some of r.l. stines stories. and hes a really good author! |
| Deenu12 2007-12-20 ch 16, anon. | abuseokay you seriously deserve to be a writer -- enough said? |
| My Tru Destiny 2007-11-25 ch 16, | abuseWOW! I don't know what else to say but WOW! This story was amazing! I can't wait to read more of your stories. You should really consider going pro. I think that you could make it. The story kept me guessing until the end. I actually thought that Brandon was the killer towards the beginning. I would have never guessed that it was July's "mother." You kept me guessing until the end which is not an easy task. Thank-you for writing such a good story! 'Til next time! ~Ash~ |
| soojinyeh 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuselove it. Read and review me please. |
| EverythingWeHad 2007-09-17 ch 16, | abuseOh my god! I absolutely loved the story! Haha. It's so sad it had to come to an end. -sighs- :( Oh well. Haha. You deserve an around of applause for this phenomenal story!-huge audience cheers and claps so loudly!- Haha. It's good she lived happily. Thank god she didn't die, man that would have been a serious twist and I would have killed you. HAHA. =]] Oh and I love the song Apologize. AWESOME! Haha. :D Can't wait till yuor other stories. Haha. |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-09-17 ch 16, | abuseWow, I loved this story! You really ended it well and it was a great read. You should consider publishing it (and making a sequel)! Keep on writing! =) |
| Stoked Is Rad 2007-09-16 ch 16, | abuseIt's over! I loved this story and I'm so happy you finally finished it. Brandon and July and their dirty moments. Haha. Stacey is alive and well and their dad is back. They got the happy ending. Lucky them! I still love it. Such a great story. Natalie. |
| EverythingWeHad 2007-08-20 ch 15, | abuseOMG OMG!! Stacey's alive??! AH! And there's only about 2 chapters left. aww. =/ I wonder how July's going to take it when she talks to her REAL father!! GAH!! please update!! ( |
| Stoked Is Rad 2007-08-19 ch 15, | abuseMy God, I'm glad my life isn't so dramatic! Haha. Stacy's alive. I always had the oddest feeling about that. Now who is this guy... I'm too lazy to guess. You seriously have to finish this soon. I have to know what happens. Natalie |
| Stoked Is Rad 2007-08-16 ch 14, | abuseYou really need to update this story! Making other people suffer and wonder is just not right. I NEED to know what happens. Update...you can do it. Natalie |
| EverythingWeHad 2007-08-08 ch 14, | abuseomfg! how can you do this to mee! wahh =/ what a cliffhanger! gosh hurry up and update ! before i diee! goshh.! lmaoo and this chapter was the best i think =) Prolly because it was super long. mwhaha =) as always update! |
| EverythingWeHad 2007-07-27 ch 13, | abuseomgg i love this story so far! PLEASE UPDATE!! IT'S AWESOME :] |
| FantasiaFirst 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseHi, I only read the first paragraph. But it just read She this, she that...I think you might want to rewrite it. It gets a bit boring that she brushed her teeth and she ate waffles. She liked it that way. |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-06-20 ch 11, | abuseAnother good chapter! |
| Ivy Moore 2007-06-19 ch 10, | abuseOh, I just relized I hade been reading without reviewing. oi. Such a bad person. Anyway, awesome writing and good characters as always. You have a talent to make the reader bond with the character. It was sort-of a filler chapter, but it did move the story along. CONTINUE! |