"Austin picked up a small, empty vial near the throne. “Don’t leave these out. I get suspicious.”

Awesome line! You excel in this genre!

"Austin didn’t want to see the result, although he did hear the sickening thud, CRACK! of the man’s gravity induced trauma."

Love your description!

I like it already!

I loved it! This is a very entertaining story!:)
jbchick84

I've gotta say, I really like this.

Pretty good! I look forward to the next chapter.