I thought this preface was really interesting. I'm a little depressed that this was published about two months ago. I like this, and if you had written any more, I think you should post it. Also, I hadn't realized before (you reviewed one of my stories so I'm returning the favor) that you were the author of Two Hearts, One Dragon. (Because you should update that, too!)

hm, potential. you've got it, most def. *grin* i'd like to see more of this. keep it up.

btw, what do you use for line separaters? you can use words or the little dashes all banded together for a line. i'd recommend that. i was a little confused for a second. *grin*

good luck!

Dude, update soon.
I heart the plot since it's so creative.
Good job. :)

STUCK! Intriguing...I'd love for you to continue this.

UPDATE SOON!