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| Tytherpol 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot, but i wish the last word in line five would be 'lies,' not 'eyes.' it's good, though. |
| S. Kaspar Rollins 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseLove is nothing that can be anticipated, nothing that can be defined, nothing that can be chosen, and this poem illustrates that point well. |
| EyesEmphatic 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely. Well done. |