Cute poem! XDD! C'est tres bonne!!

Very bittersweet and sad! But still very lovely and raw! XD! I love it!!

I loved the messages you conveyed, and I thought the poems were beautiful.

In the future, you might want to try poems that don't rhyme. Sometimes, when writing ones that do, you can't properly express your emotions, because you're trying to find out how to say it. And when you find words, they're not necessarily in keeping with the flow of the poem. I guess you could say that it often acts as a barrier.

Still, amazing!

wowie.
no your not the only one.
i feel exactly the same way.
*stares wide eyed*
its so pretty.
hey! if i ever need a poem? remind me to ask you.
x