I adore Mary Higgins Clark!

Nice one-shot! It was short and cute..

-AG :)

Really short, but it's a one shot so duh it would be! I liked it alot.

lol XD she kicked boys in the balls! XD

I liked this!! Really cute. :)

aw...that's adorable!



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haha. nice way to be remembered.

that was short and sweet. hehe.. maybe you could lengthen it up a bit? :)

hey, cool one-shot. i'm actually an american-filipino and it's interesting to read something that another filipino had written... o-o they gotz ferrets in the Philippines?

I like the way you write. It's not that often when I see a work of a Filipino. Very applaudable.
I've read your profile in and I wonder where you go to college?

Yeah, this is a good one. you ought make a bigger story out of it.

This is so adorable! It was so random how she ran into the guy again.. and actually got along with him.. but the sister's long pause and "does he have a police—" made me giggle. Nice job! =D

Aww this is funny AND cute. :] *adds to c2*

i simply love it. :]

I really enjoyed reading this and am a little sad that it's a one-shot.

I liked Sam's character and loved how you started the story, it was quite dramatic to say the least.

I thought the ending was a bit abrupt and her change of behavior at the end a bit odd, only because it was a quick turnaround from the beginning but this being a one-shot does limit the plot line a bit.

I would love to see you develop this into a longer piece simply because I loved your writing style and the brief intro into the characters.

Great job.

Ha! LOL, it makes me think that maybe there's hope for me. XD