well said indeed )

Nice speech.

Twilight Starr

Actually, this would make a very good going-away speech. Good for someone to use at graduation, or maybe just something that would go well in a yearbook too.

*holds up glass* Cheers.

You really have a talent for rhythm. This belong in an inspirational book for graduates.

Lovely work; I enjoy reading it.

-R. Louise

Brilliant, just brilliant. Well done on this!

loved it

I loved this, and think it is something a lot of people can relate to. The first four stanzas were probably my absolute favorites, but this was a great poem altoghther. Wonderful job, keep it up.