Beautiful piece. It's said how girls don't try to get away from the men that abuse them.

Twilight Starr

Great Work! I loved it, I can relate to most of it _

Kristie Marie

This is brilliant. Good job!

Just so you know, I think this poem is beautiful. It's got such a great message-'you have to love yourself in order to be in a healthy, loving relationship.'

These are my favorite lines:

"I think my other half is near/ some warmness prevails"

Great job, keep working on that grammar, and you're welcome. :)