 Changeling104 2009-01-13 . chapter 1that was...so sad! *sniff sniff
but i loved it! |
 Chit Chat Cat 2009-01-12 . chapter 1**Tears flowing*Sniff*
Okay you did make me cry because one, I sang a song my senior year in chorus and no one realized how strong a singer i was,two when I graduated,there were no friends and family there for me and the only person I had a crush on simply looked in my direction as he waved at his friends to say good-bye. I went home to a terribly sick father and a mother stressed to pay his hospital bills and over and over and over I prayed that one day my heart would heal. It is still hoping to this day that the old feelings of lost love would go away.
Your story touched me, and I am feeling sort of down, so funny I read this all the way through.
Great Job!! |
 Solade 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Good story! Lots of emotion and depth behind it.
I'm kinda confused though why at the end she says she knows he'll keep that promise when it's not like he's doing anything, but maybe I'm just misunderstanding.
Anyways, fantastic story! Keep up the awesome work! |
 A Frozen Flame 2007-06-22 . chapter 1*sniff* *sniff* Its...so SAD! wait, i need a tissue...*goes over to get a tissue* PLUHAGHA...ahh, bless me. lol
great story. kinda short, but i liked it. YAY |
 Vesta J 2007-06-20 . chapter 1this was very well written and i like how you let out the emotions. too bad i can't relate...i've never been that close to any guy before |
 ThePiracyOfHearts 2007-05-23 . chapter 1great opening lines.
gave me a chuckle.
xof♥ |
 silently watching 2007-05-22 . chapter 1if that is based on truth then i hope u r feeling stronger now. I LUV THAT SONG! i luv that band... that album...
u have good taste in music & i m sure u did well
sarah |