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| DiaRose 2007-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseThat’s really beautiful. You write so wonderfully; it’s understandable but in no way simple, and your symbolism is wonderful. |
| FATEpending 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. it all clicks together, i love it. i understand it. |
| DarkBlysse 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuse"Tug a war on my heart"--I love that line. It's not the most original line ever, but it really fits here and doesn't seem as chliche as it would in other poems. "And truth be told, East will never meet west." --Those two lines, though, are my favorites. They hold such despair and hopelessness, like you've given up--but you don't mind all that much. I get a feeling of quiet acceptance from them. Great work! |