There's something about the last line that makes me hear it whispered in my mind when I read it to myself. It's very powerful and leaves me feeling a little sad and hopeful at the same time. Take care.

very symbolic - loved the sound of condescending and transcending together. nice work.

Amazing. Your work is truly amazing. I haven't tuned in for a while because of school and whatnot, but my God you are amazing.

I really like your way of writing stuffs like this, it's funny and hot, I like your irony n.n you're a great writer.