A rather odd kind of poem, but that doesn't mean it didn't speak to me. I'm going through the same thing. It tugged at my heart a bit, good job.

Let's get right to it, shall we?

'...But you a lot to me...'

-I think you're missing something in there

hm... I'm not sure there's anything else. Something seems to be trying to catch my attention but I can't put my finger on it... uh, oh. gotta go to my bro's baseball game. ttyl!

So touching. I know exactly how you feel, and believe me, I know what you're going through. as far as this being only negative, there could be a positive side to it, and I think everyone should see that.

Keep writing.

This seems like just a really sore sight for eyes from someone with either a lusting for someone or someone not over a relationship.

I didn't really see anything poetic in it, it kinda reminds me of my earlier work.

But whatever who am I to judge, the past few poems I wrote were utter shit, so sorry for this.

I'll read some of your other work and see if this was just and oddball.

Take care and sorry if I offended you

peace & love,

-N