I like this. Its good. Creative, interesting, intelligent. One thing tho, wouldn't the pasengers on teh plane have recognized him, or was he on a semi-private plane?
ooh man his story is really interesting! i think you've drawn me into the world of sci-fi :P in the first chapter you wrote of the Kitsune novel, i was wondering if i could have a look at that. thanks for the good read :D