please please please keep going!

wow.

she tried to kill herself.

would have NEVER guessed that one.

good job!

haha. yay becky n jake. finally. hm... now how is lindsey n will gonna find out about them? oh no. who knows what will happen? alright. done rambling. write the next chapter

I just started reading this story today and i love it

the plot is great

wow deep with the wanting to kill each other thing

anyways please update as soon as possible

thanks :-)

cool story. but about chap 8: am i the only one who realizes that she's buck naked. as he kisses her. pressed up against a rock wall. (u didnt write in that she, or him for that matter, put back on their clothes) makes for an interesting mental picture...

that was so totally weird. FINALLY lindsey and Will kissed. but, u TOTALLY forgot about becky and jake! poor them. i want to know what happens with them! they kissed a couple chapters ago and nothing has happened since! its crazy! the next one better be ALL ABOUT becky n jake since this one was ALL ABOUT lindsey and will. alright, have fun writing the next chapter.

but I

think the stories going a little

to have a slow chappie

that focuses on their thoughts.

Fluff it a little know?

But still good.

very good story!

uhm.

DUH WILLIAM!

YOU DID IT BECAUSE YOU SECRETLY LOVE HER AND WANTED HER!

haha.

UPDATE!

yay! they kissed! but we didn't hear anything from the other two, where are they? oh well, update soon!

This is a pretty good story :) lol the first chapter made me laugh.

they going to like eachother.

even if i could do without the cussing, i understand it.

like, if i was stuck on an island with the guy i hate i would be cussing him out and like throwig him in the ocean.

haha.

great job.

update soon!

You'd think he'd be a little just a little

more how awful I mean

really she could be dead for all he knows.

Oh, Becky and Jake are SO going to get caught by Lindsey and Will soon! Hurry up and post the next chapter so I can find out what happens! I love the name of their cabin. I really do think that Lindsey needs to take a chill pill, though. ((yes, i know I have said that sort of thing about the past 3 chapters, but its SO true))!Belle

fantastic job! i hope will and lindsey start being friends, it looks like they kinda like eachother as friends now. hm. lindsey AND will need to stop being a bitch though haha