A very touching story that brought a tear to my eyes at more than one part. The emotion, chaos, and intensity of love have been captured wonderfully in your words. The ending was magnificent, despite my fears of what could happen.

Your stark realism only adds another layer to this story, and only makes it that much more engaging, setting it above other romances that I've read and quickly forgotten.

On the flip side, and though I hate to point out anything wrong with the story, I did notice a few points were Susan's and Lisa's names were flipped, especially in the final chapter. It took away from the impact of the scene dealing with Storr.

That was the only major issue that stuck out in my mind. Besides that, it was an amazing piece that I'll come back to read again some day.

Thank you.

omg wow @_@ amazing, thank you. thank you for writing this story.

very good, but i reccommend a look over, to add little things that may be necessary

i like this story, it intrigued me

ciao
sam

Wonderful ending.

This is such a unique and wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.

This is great!

Forget regret, or life is yours to miss.
Rent!

And I love how you broke off and made it all disorienting and confusing when she snapped into her old memory. Amazing job.

That was so beautiful!

Whoa! I loved that story. Couldn't even take my eyes off of it. Spent all of today reading it. There should be a part two. That was hot. Crazy story. I want more!

I read this and then didnt review, sorry, but then I checked it out again and realized it was the last chapter, I was like what? But its a good ending, their both happy, it was a good story.

I don't know what to say, except that I completely agree with everything that 'Knightmare Elite' has said.

Should I read this as the final chapter, though? Because this could easily be an ending, but it also could be the end of a chapter so I'm not completely sure. I definitely hope there is more (drama) to come, though! =) Love this couple.

~Lotte

Wow, what a dramatic turn of events. This is a true coming full circle chapter. From the moment Susan saw Jeremiah, it was as if everything moved in slow motion, the momentarily reassessed the past five years since the accident, and then at who he had become. That scene was so emotional, and I was really happy to see that he came to respect Susan and show remorse for what he did.

And it is unfortunate in the ultimate pain of redemption. Even with all that Jeremiah did, he truly understood the depth of his actions, the dramatic effect he had on Susan's life, and his guilt was his ultimate burdeon. It's such a sad story as much as it is happy for the characters.

I'm really happy for Lisa and Susan, I know I say this a lot but I really am. They're so good for each other, and I hope it can stay that way. Great chapter!

I'm so happy I found this story again! I spend my whole night searching for it, hah.

Anyway, I think this is really well written. I really love Lisa's character and the way she's protective of Susan. I don't know, it's just really interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

~Lotte

The thing that really stuck out to me was Lisa's sincere trust in Susan during during the hotel scene. It's amazing how much these two have gone through, really showcasing the power of love. Lisa has come a long way by physically and emotionally with Susan in her life. Though there is cause for concern in this chapter, I feel this can only bring them closer. Great chapter.

great story ..

Good chapter, they're both close now, thats good. update soon.

I am honestly excited about this story.

The storyline is different from any average fiction about two women and their relationships. This story gives me an idea--a perspective of someone bound to a wheelchair. If I would be either afraid of love or hold my stance and build up my life again.

I was so scared that Lisa was going to get hit again in this chapter, but when Susan pulled her out of the way it literally took the emptiness out of my stomach. Susan is Lisa's new light of happiness/guardian. They're perfect.

I just want to say it's an interesting read and I hope you continue this.