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ICaughtFire 2007-10-04 ch 7,	abuseWonderful ending. This is such a unique and wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.
ICaughtFire 2007-10-04 ch 5,	abuseThis is great! Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. Rent! And I love how you broke off and made it all disorienting and confusing when she snapped into her old memory. Amazing job.
ghostlygeorge 2007-09-11 ch 7,	abuseThat was so beautiful!
Always Pencil 2007-07-29 ch 7,	abuseWhoa! I loved that story. Couldn't even take my eyes off of it. Spent all of today reading it. There should be a part two. That was hot. Crazy story. I want more!
PrettyAwkward 2007-07-11 ch 7,	abuseI read this and then didnt review, sorry, but then I checked it out again and realized it was the last chapter, I was like what? But its a good ending, their both happy, it was a good story.
EndlesslySheSaid 2007-07-06 ch 7,	abuseI don't know what to say, except that I completely agree with everything that 'Knightmare Elite' has said. Should I read this as the final chapter, though? Because this could easily be an ending, but it also could be the end of a chapter so I'm not completely sure. I definitely hope there is more (drama) to come, though! =) Love this couple. ~Lotte
Knightmare Elite 2007-07-05 ch 7,	abuseWow, what a dramatic turn of events. This is a true coming full circle chapter. From the moment Susan saw Jeremiah, it was as if everything moved in slow motion, the momentarily reassessed the past five years since the accident, and then at who he had become. That scene was so emotional, and I was really happy to see that he came to respect Susan and show remorse for what he did. And it is unfortunate in the ultimate pain of redemption. Even with all that Jeremiah did, he truly understood the depth of his actions, the dramatic effect he had on Susan's life, and his guilt was his ultimate burdeon. It's such a sad story as much as it is happy for the characters. I'm really happy for Lisa and Susan, I know I say this a lot but I really am. They're so good for each other, and I hope it can stay that way. Great chapter!
EndlesslySheSaid 2007-07-03 ch 6,	abuseI'm so happy I found this story again! I spend my whole night searching for it, hah. Anyway, I think this is really well written. I really love Lisa's character and the way she's protective of Susan. I don't know, it's just really interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ~Lotte
Knightmare Elite 2007-07-01 ch 6,	abuseThe thing that really stuck out to me was Lisa's sincere trust in Susan during during the hotel scene. It's amazing how much these two have gone through, really showcasing the power of love. Lisa has come a long way by physically and emotionally with Susan in her life. Though there is cause for concern in this chapter, I feel this can only bring them closer. Great chapter.
seulementmoi 2007-06-30 ch 6,	abusegreat story ..
PrettyAwkward 2007-06-29 ch 6,	abuseGood chapter, they're both close now, thats good. update soon.
Leen 2007-06-29 ch 5, anon.	abuseI am honestly excited about this story. The storyline is different from any average fiction about two women and their relationships. This story gives me an idea--a perspective of someone bound to a wheelchair. If I would be either afraid of love or hold my stance and build up my life again. I was so scared that Lisa was going to get hit again in this chapter, but when Susan pulled her out of the way it literally took the emptiness out of my stomach. Susan is Lisa's new light of happiness/guardian. They're perfect. I just want to say it's an interesting read and I hope you continue this.
Knightmare Elite 2007-06-27 ch 5,	abuseI totally forgot I had kept this story open in a separate tab since this morning. So it's my bedtime story, and this was a really nice chapter. Lisa is such a strong person despite her disability, especially how she tried to save herself as grim as the situation seemed. And Susan once again proved how much she loved Lisa. It was really sweet how she helped clean her up. I did feel for them during the pictures, it was a sad moment, but something that ultimately brought them together and they were both aware of the sadness which creates their happiness. Oh and I've been to the Cheesecake Factory, that place is pretty overpriced. And I swear they dump a pound of sugar in their lemonade! Sorry for going off topic, but great chapter, can't wait to see more.
PrettyAwkward 2007-06-26 ch 5,	abuseI thought Lisa got hit again, but she didnt thank god, it was a good chapter, Update soon.
PrettyAwkward 2007-06-22 ch 4,	abuseVery good story, I really like it. This chapter was sad. I get the feeling that Susan is going to regret what her and Lisa are going to do after its done. Shes not thinking clearly, she just cant be ready after they come home from the funeral. It was good though. Update soon.

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