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KT Writes 2008-08-21 ch 22,	abuseI absolutely love your characters - not just in this story but in all of them. You have such a way with putting the reader right in the character's head. Your stories are always very emotional with just the right blend of romance, drama and angst. I especially love how the secondary characters aren't just one-dimensional paper dolls. You give them personality. Reading any one of your stories always puts me in a better mood. Thanks.
claireponcherrii 2008-08-19 ch 1,	abusenice...
a beginner 2008-07-28 ch 22,	abusethnx for the story... :)
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-15 ch 22,	abuseI loved it!
mistress tee 2008-07-15 ch 22,	abuseyup. finished it and it's amazing! good job! :D
mistress tee 2008-07-14 ch 1,	abuseso I've only read the first chapter but this is very good so far.
tootsie.daul28 2008-07-13 ch 22,	abuseAbsolutely loved it! I'm such a sucker for baseball!
ForeverWasteAway 2008-06-02 ch 22,	abuseI love all your stories! In the process of reading them all now!
Genato 2008-04-16 ch 22,	abusehm.. the story is good but some of the parts happened too fast. you have to slow down and let it progress naturally or some sh*t like that. lol. it was just.. a bit abrupt in between chapters. and it was so short.. i wanted more, woman! lol. but great job and improve. .. i just checked out your profile and saw that it was your first story. scratch what i said. for a first story in fp, it was great.
-RomanticallyCliched- 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abusesounds in-ter-rest-ting!
Hopelessly Clueless 2008-03-20 ch 22,	abuseThat was an amazing story! I loved it all! The way it was written, the syle, everything! i'm glad they made it through it all!! Great story, can't wait to read more from you!! :D
bananamilkshake 2008-02-19 ch 22,	abusehello! i think this is the first time i'm writing a review for you... but this one is not just for 'Out At Home', but for a couple other stories you've written. Haven't read all of what you've wrote, but what i've read so far has kept me coming back for more! I just can't seem to turn my laptop off and i keep reading late into the night... Anyway, just a big thank you for writing them... they're really great, so keep up the good work! i really know nothing about baseball, but your stories have got me kinda interested in them. haha... wonderful work and keep on going!
Element Goddess 2008-02-10 ch 22,	abuseAwesome story! I couldnt stop reading until i was finished. Good job,
AJS 2008-02-09 ch 22,	abuseAw Taylor & Brady are not really cute per say, but I really like them together :) The only thing I think you should have done more of is to build up Taylor's attraction towards Brady in the beginning, before they got together, to kind of show that even though she was trying to fight Brady, she couldn't help but to be swooped up in his charms anyways, just like the old days. Or something like that. I know it was kind of implied, it being the whole story line and all, but if you really look at it, up until the point where Taylor accepts Brady, we don't really have much indication that she has had thoughts of getting back together with him, only of forgiving him. I'm also curious as to what happened to Jason and Gretchen after that whole fiasco. Did Brady even tell him off? He didn't really act like he knew that Jason was no good news before all that happened... and why was Brady's hand looking like it was pushing up Gretchen's skirt/dress in the pictures? Also, I'm sure that Brady was stronger than her - wouldn't he have been able to stop her from even opening his mouth while she was kissing him? Anyways. Cute story. It's getting me all over again thinking about Gretchen. I kind of agree that Brady didn't really have the right to get at Taylor for not trusting him, especially after all that he did to her... oh well. At least he realized it :) Keep writing! -- Alyssa
Lady Knight 1512 2008-01-29 ch 22,	abuseVery nice. I liked this, but found myself always wanting to learn more about the secondary characters, Josh in particular, just because he struck a cord with me. Brady was fabulous. He was a great mix of sweetness and arrogance that worked really well, particularly with Taylor's insecurity. They really complimented each other well. Henry was such a jerk, and that daughter of his. Oh my God. I can't believe she did that to her! It was so mean! And evil! Gretchen too. Didn't like her, although it would have been nice to see more of her as well before those pictures arrived in Taylor's inbox. Overall, i really liked this, and am glad i read it. I think there are two more of your stories to get through now. One is finished, but the other isn't. Or at least, that's what i remember. I may be wrong. Either way, i can't wait. I'll start the next one right now. ~LK1512~

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