Well... that's an interesting but sad twist. Wow. Can't imagine superheroes acting like that, but yeah in the real world, if superheroes existed, it's very possible.

Thanks for an interesting read!

Fascinating story. A touch of humor here and there and a good going down fighting story from a point of view not done often. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too distracting. I hope to see more work of yours in this style.

Aw, man. . . I read that, steadily, all the way to the last word.
Few things have I ever read that could keep me interested. You had a couple parts that made me chuckle, a few parts that made me a bit sad, and the WHOLE thing kept me interested.

Well, I say the whole thing, but. . . why did you write it so sadly?
This would have been one good story had it kept going and not ended on such a poor note.
Other than a couple of comma-mistakes, this was a real beauty. Man, how upsetting. . . darn you!

Anyway, good stuff. Good stuff.

- Atari