excelent story its like a cross between battle royal and naruto can't wait for the update

Hm... good concept, and fun readable characterizations. However, I'd count this as chapter one, for two reasons...

1.)It's a bit long for a prologue
2.)It's really, really too long to be all in italics.

But otherwise, bravo! I just know that the characters will start getting explained, and the action will be fast paced.