oh wow. I wanna cry. thats amazing emotion. you are awesome.

Most of it I loved, really loved, like
"My name is of no concern
At my house, I’m the good girl
I do anything, you don’t have to ask twice
Ain’t that nice?"
"Until I let it go
And from that moment on
It’s been my antidote"
"We all have
Secrets x3
We all have
Secrets x3
We all have
Secrets x3

We all live, on the same earth
We all walk, on the same land
We see the same stars
We taste the same seas"
"Every star represents a secret held within us
Every leaf that falls another soul is hopeless
Every star represents a secret held within us
Every leaf that falls another soul is hopeless"
But you fell into cliche a lot, with the cutting, the girlfriend, the shooting, it was all very...heard before. Good luck with this!

This was a powerful song. I liked the short sentences in this song, adding to the effect. I missed the rhyming, though. I liked how you wrote about how you had a secret, though I feel sorry for what happened to you, and the fact that you damaged yourself later on.
The Reverse Edge Blade