|Reviews for Fake|
| D. Rochelle 7/3/07 . chapter 1
There is so much implication in the last line. It's lovely!
| Definition 6/23/07 . chapter 1
The last line immerses this haiku into a deep sense of betrayal and thought. Nicely done.
| Aquafied 5/28/07 . chapter 1
it is very specific word choice
wolves glancing, hmm.
the live art of meaningless things
how can you live without talking about everyone else?
| Basara 5/25/07 . chapter 1
| ackronbronze 5/23/07 . chapter 1
nice poem... i liked the tone... i saw it as the narrator was talking about someone backstabbing another person with the line "wolves glancing backwards". Nice Job!