| Reviews for Fake |
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D. Rochelle 7/3/07 . chapter 1There is so much implication in the last line. It's lovely! |
Definition 6/23/07 . chapter 1The last line immerses this haiku into a deep sense of betrayal and thought. Nicely done. |
Aquafied 5/28/07 . chapter 1it is very specific word choice wolves glancing, hmm. the live art of meaningless things how can you live without talking about everyone else? very well. |
Basara 5/25/07 . chapter 1betrayal... nice... |
ackronbronze 5/23/07 . chapter 1nice poem... i liked the tone... i saw it as the narrator was talking about someone backstabbing another person with the line "wolves glancing backwards". Nice Job! |