|Reviews for Optimism|
| tonight we bloom 8/19/09 . chapter 1
This has such delicate imagery, I love it.
I love this "each petal to the puddle beneath this heaven we never see." Beautiful.
I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot to me!
| Definition 6/23/07 . chapter 1
The first paragraph is vivid and very pretty. But what I love even more is how you concluded the composition in a very complete and full manner. Perfectly executed.
| no.peace.los.angeles 5/26/07 . chapter 1
I love how you take an abstract emotion or word, like optimism, and turn it into this tangible thing. So beautiful. I could see this so clearly. Keep writing! :)
| Basara 5/25/07 . chapter 1
| recycle rhymes 5/25/07 . chapter 1
great imagery and last line...breathtaking. nice work.