This has such delicate imagery, I love it.

I love this "each petal to the puddle beneath this heaven we never see." Beautiful.

I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot to me!

The first paragraph is vivid and very pretty. But what I love even more is how you concluded the composition in a very complete and full manner. Perfectly executed.

I love how you take an abstract emotion or word, like optimism, and turn it into this tangible thing. So beautiful. I could see this so clearly. Keep writing! :)

sweet...

nice...

great imagery and last line...breathtaking. nice work.