i love how you ended this piece, very effective.

i like...
its deep and harsh but its really cool. i like your words, they are so realistic yet shelled and the sentences are really original...

B.A.J

Angst whore!

The last line... OMG >.<

Is this about you?

the chapter has so uch depth in it it's so sad!

You portray and project all your emotions through your writing so vividly.

This makes me want to cry..

What's up with the cracked lips?! o_o I hate mirrors. Nearly smashed my bathroom one a few times. Uncle thinks I'm retarded when I talk about monsters, horrors in the mirror. -_- I know you hate the sun but go take a jog or something. get some endorphins going trough your blood. Or worse come to worse, steal someone's steriods. >.> j/k [huggle] >.< This is a gripping piece.

Great poetic language. Loved this. Really sad. Well done.

That was simply amazing. Harsh, but almost poetic. Good job on this.

~carm~

I'm so sorry about your parents. but if it makes you feel any better, this was beautiful. absolutely beautiful. I really loved it. good job. and hopefully the situation with your parents will improve! I really hope it does.

bec

Oh sweetie! I really hope you're okay, I'm sure your parents will be fine and everything will be okay. Just eat some chocolate and go talk to them. I like this piece, its a bit confusing but yea. Take care!