Reviews for Bury Me, Bury Me - FictionPress.com

fire clan angel 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseyou totally need a sequel for this who's this song by?
Silken Silver Berries 2007-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abusewow this was powerful. a little scary..i like the fact that the kid got rescued at the end. kind of inspiring. good job!!
daisy dreams. 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseso sad.. You are an amazing writer!
Morbidsnowbeast 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abuseThis was really sad and beautiful. You describe things very very well. Thank you for writing this, your obedient servant, G.I.A.M.P
Kate Ford 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abuseThis was a very well written story. I liked how the descriptive imagery really gave the reader an full image. I have a couple of questions that aren't really able to be inferred from the text such as "Do they live in an apartment?" or "Did the main character die?" It is okay to leave the reader with a couple of questions but never too many that the story doesn't make sense.
Undrahas 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abusethis was so good! but you kept putting her in some of the sentences. it was more meaningful in 1st person point of view, it showed alot more emotion, but i got a question. did the girl live or die? it ends in song wich i do like, but i want to know if she lived or died. yeah i could use my imaganation like she died on the way to the hospital, or she lived and the father was arrested for attmepted murder and the girl was adopted or something but sometimes i want a complete ending. but yeah it was good, just please answer my question.