OMG OMG OMG please please read my poem about slowing down! Oh i feel a kind of bond between us. I LOVE it when people have the same idea as me (most of the time). You must read it! I don't know why, but you must!

Ok I am calmer now. Very very VERY good work; I think your 'slow down' poem is better than mine...hmph...

I like the progression to the final phrase. I know how you feel. Very nicely accomplished with your visual imagery.