oh wow (again) this would sound so good to music! I could just imagine evanesance singing this (if you know who they are, some of their songs are real good) by the way, your profiley-thingy is really funny :-p

AH! I love it! Its going on my favorites!

This song is very catchy. I love the first and second verses; they are very rythmic and well, I just love them. I don't see many songs that rhyme or have a flow like this one, so I'm very happy with it and most definitely impressed.

:D This song is going straight into my favorites.

I could almost swear I've heard the first verse in a song. . . Metallica!! I think it was in 'Sandman' or somethin. . .yeah, soemthing by Metallica I know that much. Otherwise. . . it was good, pretty good.
Jo

This was cool! I loved it! First time I've ever read a song on fictionpress with so good rhyming! This had a catchy tune and a nice message! Truly a great song! Keep it up!
The Reverse Edge Blade