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| Black.dragons 2008-08-31 ch 6,  | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY, sorry i haven't reviewed before but i just found in and i am despritly wating for more! |
| Kevin 2008-06-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseWoah. Pretty creepy. Kindof Interesting. Not my kindof thing really. Its pretty odd. dude... |
| imaRIOT 2008-03-30 ch 6, | abuseI love it! |
| youshida101 2008-01-06 ch 6, | abuseI can wait to find out the Vee have in minde. Greate story you have there man. So please continue. |
| dymonte 2007-09-25 ch 6, anon. | abusevery interesting story... i just hope you dont' have siblings - joking. Keep writing |
| .love.life.lost. 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseIt's definitly interesting, to say the least. I like it a lot, and can't wait to see what happens next. =) Keep up the awesomenes! |
| Matt Wittherson 2007-06-23 ch 6, | abuse(directed mainly at Yelir, but also at KK) I know it sounds crazy, but this story is beautifully written, and it would be a shame not to finish it. Even if the moral is truly insane(sorry Yelir, I had only read chapter one when I told you my opinion on it, but the other chapters show how off the wall you are, but we like it.) So, to wrap up this review, keep writing, just keep in mind that she is his sister(shudder). |
| The.Archer 2007-06-14 ch 6, | abuseHa, this is wicked! Yes, it is a good story, I stand with karatekid there - sorry yelir. Although, why should i apologise? I'm complementing your story. Ha, love it, you are on my alert |
| purely-fate 2007-06-13 ch 6, | abuseHmm...sounds interesting. Not a very common plotline but keep it up! =) |
| Mrs. Drama Lover 2007-06-13 ch 6, | abuseOH OH OH MORE MORE MORE! Whats gonna happen i wanna know i wanna know! :) :) :) |
| Mrs. Drama Lover 2007-06-12 ch 5, | abusewrite more soon this is interesting |
| Roundtree 2007-05-31 ch 3, | abuseThe story is getting interesting ;). I can find very few stories with incest in them. It's a concept I can take, but it is controversal, so it's hard to find. |
| ihrtbks 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseGood so far! Details aren't overdone and better the story, letting you feel you were there. A summary would be nice. UPDATE SOON! |